Chapter One

Thorns in Bloom

Created by Dominick Frederick

Welcome to the first chapter of Thorns in Bloom! I’m excited to share this journey with you. Dive in and let me know what you think, your feedback helps shape the future of this story!

After reading chapter one, please take a moment to share your thoughts in the anonymous survey below! Rate from (1 to 5) 5 means you loved it, 1 means it wasn’t for you. Feedback is always welcome!

Chapter One

The Little Queen

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Chapter One survey

Engagement: Did the opening chapter capture your attention? If so, what specifically hooked you? If not, what could improve it?

Clarity: Was the setting and situation clear to you? Could you visualize the scenes easily?

Pace : Did the chapter move at a good pace? Were there moments that felt rushed or dragged out?

Theme: Did the chapter successfully introduce the dark fantasy theme of vengeance? Were you curious to see how this theme would evolve?

Overall Impression: Does this chapter make you want to continue reading the story? Why or why not?

Favorite Part: What was your favorite part of the chapter, and why?

Least Favorite Part: Was there anything you felt could be removed, expanded, or rewritten?

Final Thoughts: Did you enjoy the story? Why or why not?